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You were planning a sleepover with your best friend Gou. You were preparing everything, getting the pullout couch and snacks ready. You quickly check the news, major storm clouds were coming in the from the West. You weren't into storms, least you forget blackouts, or thunderstorms, or both together! You were about to have a little panic attack due to the nervousness, but you received a phone call from Gou.

“Hey _____, can I ask you something?”

“Sure ask away Kou.” You said remembering how she hates it when you pronounce her actual name.

“My mom won’t let me come over unless I bring Rin, um, do you mind?”

“Oh, sure I guess, that is fine.” That is what you said but in your head you were freaking out, with happiness.

“Thanks _____! I’ll be there in a few.”

With that she hung up and most likely was getting prepared for tonight. You were actually really nervous to hear that Rin was coming as well, you had a crush on him for a while, but you never really worked up the courage to talk to him as much. About an hour has passed since Gou had called you, just as you thought about the call there was a knock on the door. You made your way to the door and answered it, already knowing who it was. Gou ran in and hugged you full force.

“_____ I am soooo excited for tonight!” Gou exclaimed.

“oh me too, me too _____” Rin said in a girly mocking tone. You glared at Rin and said,

“Tonight will be fun, now that you are here” you said sarcastically.

He lifted up an eyebrow and said “ Really now _____. Well when we watch the horror movie tonight you can hug me if you want,” He said with a wink and walked over to the chips.

You looked at Gou, who was staring at her brother and shaking her head in disbelief and disappointment.  

“Well, let’s start watching the movies now” Gou said while walking over to the pullout couch and made herself comfortable at the far side of the bed.

You saw that the movie was your least favorite kinds of movies, with tons of gore and horrifying images as well as sounds. As you started the movie the weather had already begun to get worse, really think storm clouds were overhead, you were in for a long night. You started the movie, you got comfortable beside Gou sitting in the middle of the bed, while Rin sat beside you on the other far side of the bed. Both yourself and Gou shared a bowl of popcorn while Rin on the other hand was hogging the whole bag of chips.

The movie in the beginning wasn’t so bad, but as the night went on the storm started to roll in. With the help of the movie it didn’t take you long to get scared. Every now and then you would let out a little yelp every time there was a jump scare or someone lost a limb, which Rin would laugh whole heartedly at you.

“What’s s-so funny R-Rin!” you asked him.

“Oh nothing, it is just funny how you can get so scared so easily” just as he said that a really loud clap of thunder was heard and you quickly jumped into his arm subconsciously.

“_____, I forgot you are afraid of Thunder right?” while you were still in his arms you nodded quickly.

Rin was smirking the whole time, he held you tightly in his arms, he thought to himself “Now I have the advantage.”

You finally let go of Rin, with a perma-blush on your face. The movie got to the worst part, where a lady was about to get sliced in half, you heard here blood curdling scream, with that the power went off with another loud clap of thunder. Once again you were in Rin’s arms.

“_____, where is the breaker box, I’ll try to get the power back” Gou said with her phone producing light.

“I--In t-the -b---b--basement,” you stuttered out.

“Alright I’ll be right back. Rin take care of her” she shot one last glare at her brother and headed for the basement”

You were shivering in Rin’s arms, you felt so vulnerable right now. You heard Rin chuckling, with that he pinned you onto the bed.

“_____, you look like an animal getting ready to be taken off to slaughter” he leaned in and kissed down your neck. You fought everything within yourself to not fall for this.

“R...Rin please s....stop” you whispered nervously.

“Why? You look so sweet and innocent” you could tell he was smirking even if it was pitch black where you were.

He skillfully captured you lips with his and kissed you with a little too much force, you grunted at the pressure on your lips. When he was finished with your lips, he made his way down your neck again. You tried to stifle the moan, but you couldn’t.

“nnngh~” you were blushing from being completely taken advantage by, by your crush.

“_____, I know how much you like me” he growled into your neck and licked the collar bone and gave it a quick nip.

“nnngh~!” This time it was loud enough for Gou to yell up from the basement.

“_____, are you alright?!” Rin mumbled against your sweet spot on your neck.

“Answer her” he started licking and nipping your sweet spot, marking you as his. With this you tried to answer back as best as you could without moaning.

“I-I’m f.....fine!” you yelled back as best as you could.

Rin finally noticed how scared you were, and pulled you close to his chest, gently.

“w...why are you b..being so n...nice to me n....now?” you whispered with a sniff.

“I’m sorry if I scared you” He said and placed a tender kiss on your forehead.

You sighed calmly and snuggled up next to him, just as that happened another loud clap of thunder hit. You let out a little shriek. Rin as best as he could rubbed your shoulder in soothing circles to calm you down. Gou finally came back upstairs.

“Sorry guys, the power probably won’t be back until tomorrow, might as well get some sleep”

You all got ready for bed.

“Good night you guys” Gou said and quickly fell asleep.

You once again snuggled into Rin’s chest. He wrapped his arms around you protectively. He lifted up your chin and placed a heart melting kiss onto them, the kiss lasted a few minutes until you both needed air.

“I love you ____, he said slightly watching the rise and fall of you chest slow down as sleep slowly started to take over. You quietly mumbled in your sleep.

“I love you too, Rin.” with that you fell asleep in his arms.

~~~~~~~~~The Next Day ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

“Awwww, Rin and _____ are bonding” she referred to you sleeping with your head on his chest and his arm wrapped around your waist.

You both slowly woke up, you yawn and slowly rubbed your neck.

“whoa ____, where did you get that~?” Gou said with a snicker referring to the hicky that Rin gave you last night.

“ugggh,....well” you were struggling with your words, so Rin decided to help out.

“She is mine now” he said with a smirk.

Gou kept giggling while you sat there and blushed a deep shade a red and hid your face into Rin’s chest. Gou won’t let you live that down.

The End
sorry it took so long guys i was busy, well the one for today will be out soon I hope you enjoy this one

I Do Not own Free! and the picture was found on Zerochan

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:icontriggertitan:
TriggerTitan Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017
Gou if I gotta sew your mouth shut to never bring this up again then so be it my mom got thread & needles
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20020530 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2016  Student General Artist
Your profile icon is soo adorable!!! 707 -I love you!- 
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Lovely-Baka Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015
My heart beat so HARD! *_* it's a really perfect story ! Thank you !! *_*
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InSaNe-DrAwInGs Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
DAMNIT I CHOKED ON MAH NOODLES WHEN HE SAID
SHES MINE NOW XDDD
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InSaNe-DrAwInGs Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What's the 4th?
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Gouuuuuuuuu >:C
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CrystalCritic Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Damnit Gou. Enju Pout Icon 
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Atsumoriso Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
I actaully freaked out in my chair because this was so cute... Bear Emoji-08 (Rolling Love) [V1] 
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bonkers-4-hatter Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student General Artist
I love this!!! X3
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Writer
aww thank you, i'm glad you like it!!
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raspberrylover4ever Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my god my feels are even more broken XD
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Zyra01 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
'///' well...
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animenerd2001 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This story is adorable. (^.^)b I love it!
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Writer
aww thank you :D
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Faustita Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
This was hot <3 xD ND CUTEE <3 
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student Writer
aww thank you that means a lot :)
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Faustita Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
Your  welcome :D
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DirectionerTwihardHP Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
"Whoa, ____, where did you get that?"

My brain: *thinks up possible replies*

Possible replies:
•"I...uh...fell on my neck. There was a rock where I fell."
•*points to Rin* He punched me in the neck.
•*points to Rin* "He bit me."

Awesome story! ^^
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Student Writer
aww thank you :D
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smilesDrivE Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Anyone who writes a fan fiction with Rin Matsuoka, is a friend of mine. :iconfinallyplz:
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student Writer
Aww I'm glad you liked it Rin is one of my favorites to writ about :)
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smilesDrivE Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Student General Artist
:icongreatjobplz:
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CandyCaneSwirl Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Student Artist
Cute~ I love it!
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snowy-owl89 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
* noebleed* I will remember this for the next thunderstorm!
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XSNSDLoverX Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student Digital Artist
mmmm I will GLADLY be Rin's ;D
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FlenaiaWings Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
cute!
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Writer
thank you :D
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KiaRyland Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D I rather like this. Mr. Sharkteeth is now mine, he may think he owns me but boyyyy is he wrong. The Seriously Evil Laugh 
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student Writer
I pray for Rin's soul ...
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KiaRyland Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh you should, it'll be fucked up by the time I'm done with him.
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crystal-moon1 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Sakurako Ohmuro (Really?) [V1]  SO CUTE
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Student Writer
Aww thank you :D
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Blackwolf3229 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This- this is beautiful. I LOVE IT!
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much :iconiloveitmoreplz:
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Blackwolf3229 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem~!
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TheNaruHinaLover Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Student General Artist
.... 
*dies* 
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Student Writer
No don't die!!
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TheNaruHinaLover Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm a ghost... I'm already dead xDDD
I completely loved it!!! 
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sasukeisAjerk Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That swim boy look like shark week
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hey-cho Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Rin is the shark, Nagisa is a penguin, Haru is the dolphin and Makoto is an Orca xD
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sasukeisAjerk Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
XD ha
Love your profile pic, ha ha levi
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hey-cho Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
xD and you have da Gaara 
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sasukeisAjerk Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
HA YEAH EPIC GAARA FACE XD
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Ira-kago Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Its so cute! Hehe ewe and riiiiiiiiiiin- *whining* why you so mean to meeee-?
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student Writer
I'm glad you liked it :D
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xXZerudaDatenOniXx Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
RIN, DID YOU EAT MY CRISPS/CHIPS? D:
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Student Writer
rin: yea, so?...
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xXZerudaDatenOniXx Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You better buy me new ones... *Yandere side turns on* or I won't be so nice on you~ 
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Student Writer
Rin: eh? ..... a...alright.....*slightly scared*
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