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“Achoo!” You were caught sneezing all day with your cold, due to your bet with Haruka on who could stay underwater water the longest, in the outside pool, in really early spring.

“_____, you have to take your medication” Makoto said softly.

You crossed your arms and turn away. “I don’t wanna” you then pouted.

That wasn’t enough to stop Makoto, he always had a different way to make you take your medication, whether it be hidden in your food, or forced in, or eventually you feel like complete crap and take it on your own.

“Please _____, it will open up your air way” his eyes pleaded you.

“No, my mouth is just fine” you said just before he covered mouth to make a point.

“mpph!” you really couldn’t breath through your nose since it was clogged. When you finally had enough you pulled his hand away, panting and gasping for air. He started chuckling when you finally took the pills.

“I’ll go make you some soup alright?” Makoto said with a smile.

“Alright, thank you.”

You turn around in your bed. Makoto was always there for you at school and especially when you were sick. Throughout the years you have known him you started to form a crush on him, but you thought he would never feel the same about you. You lightly closed you eyes and drifted into a light sleep waiting for your soup to be ready. You felt someone lightly rubbing your arm.

“_____, your soup is ready” Makoto lightly whispered in your ear.

You grumbled a bit then finally woke up to see his beautiful emerald eyes in your face. You blushed a bit that sat up, to your dismay your *writing hand* hand had fallen asleep and you cannot move it properly.

“I …. I can’t move my *writing hand* hand.” you looked the other way.

“Oh, is it asleep, here I’ll fix it” he said with a chuckle.

He gently grabbed your hand that was asleep in both of his and gently started to rub it. Through the times his was doing so, you stared into his determined emerald eyes.

“O....Ow!” you protested as it started to wake up and you felt the pins and needles.

“Ah, it's finally awake, well I’ll feed you until it stops hurting” he said with a smile.

He lightly blew on the soup and moved it slowly to your mouth so he wouldn't spill anything. You blushed and slowly ate the soup, it was very good. After you finished eating the soup it started to get late outside, the worst part was that the medication was wearing off and you felt stuffed off and extremely cold.

“_____, I can’t leave you alone like this” he said in a worried tone.

“It’s ok, I’ll be fine” you know that what you said was a lie.

“No _____, I am staying with you.” he say the symptoms of the cold coming back.

He walked over to you and put his hand to your forehead.

“hmmp, this isn’t as reliable as this” he gently put his lips to your forehead to check your temperature.

You laid there as you felt his lips on your head, you blush was getting brighter. You knew that this was a very efficient way to check but still, he was your crush after all.

“hmmm, your fever came back” he went to your nightstand and got your fever pills, your least favorite pills to take.

“know I know you don’t like these pills but you have to take them, please.”

“no” you said quickly and covered your face with the blankets.

You heard Makoto sigh and open the bottle anyway and pull out one of those disgusting pills. He leans in and lightly places his lips to yours from the other side of the blankets. You let out a slight squeak.

“M-Makoto.....I …. I don’t want you to get sick” you said nervously while your face was even more red now.

He gently pulled the blankets away from your face.

“So _____, you do like me then?” he said with a smile.

“Not enough to take that pill” you said stubbornly.

“Well then it can’t be helped then” he put the pill in between his lips and leaned into your and gave you a full kiss while slipping the pill while you were caught of guard. You gagged a bit and finally had no other choice than to swallow it.

“Makoto, I don’t want you to get sick” you said again.

“It’s ok I hardly ever get sick, and right now you are more important to me right now” he said while it followed with a hug.

“I’m not leaving your side until you get better” he said while pulling you into his chest as he layed down with you.  

“Well if you get sick, it isn’t my fault” you said with a slight giggle, his presence already making you feel better.

He laid there quietly with you noticing the cold made you uneasy. He leaned down and gave you light kisses on your forehead, your nose, your eyelids, and ear. That calmed you enough to be lulled into a light sleep.

~~~~~ A Week Later ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

“Thank you for getting me well again Makoto” you said as you hugged him.

“Well now I can atleast do this without you telling me about getting sick.”

He leaned into you placing a kiss on your lips, you wrapped your arms around his neck as he placed his around your waist. After the kiss Makoto let out a little sneeze.

“Now it looks like I am going to have to take care of you this time” you said with a slight giggle.

“hehe, yea” he said while rubbing the back of his neck.

The End
The fifth drabble hope you love Makoto as much as I do :heart: :iconiloveitmoreplz:

I found the picture on Tumblr

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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
AWW MAKOOOO
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LunaGamerImInPortal Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Student General Artist
so kawaii >u<
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Animegirl0091 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, don't worry Makoto, I'll take good care of you. ;3
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Student Writer
oh ho ho~ I believe he will be in good hands 
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dragonanimegirl180 Featured By Owner May 11, 2014
Me and my friends cry over the fact that anime boys are not real. Waaaah! I wish I had a boy who would cares for me when I'm sick.
Any way great story. I loved it  
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Animegirl0091 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ikr?? If only anime guys were real! Q.Q
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student Writer
:iconpreachplz: Preach it! I wish the same thing ... sadly they are the hardest to find :( or already taken ...

Thank you so much that means a lot :)
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dragonanimegirl180 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014
They always are taken for me... TT_TT
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Student Writer
don't worry we'll all find someone one day :iconhuggleplz:
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CandyCaneSwirl Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Student Artist
Adorable!~
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Ira-kago Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehe funny thing too cause I'm sick not with a cold but a pretty bad cough ene but this made me feel better! Thankyou for writing this! <3
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student Writer
I'm glad this made you feel better :D
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CrazyRaiPie Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I still cry when I see Makoto and how he's perfect, but not real ):
And the story is so adorable!! >v<
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Student Writer
I cry too ... more guys should be like Makoto ;P

Thank you very much! :iconiloveitmoreplz:
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CrazyRaiPie Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They should be xD or at least like Nagisa :iconilikeitplz: it would be fun and nice to have Nagisa as a (boy)friend <33
You're welcome! ^▽^
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Airkey Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love you so much right now <3 *W*

I'd been hoping I would find one of these sooner or later~

Thanks for making it~! >u<
I loved it~ <33
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Student Writer
hahaha :iconlaughingplz: I'm glad you enjoyed it 

I was thinking while writing this, "Hey the writer should be sick so Mako can make them better~" and BOOM! THIS HAPPENED 
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Airkey Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amg bless your thoughts *W*

I wish there were more of these types of ff's sob ;n;
///cries over computer
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Student Writer
well i'm sure that in time there will be ... if not smiting will occur !!
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TheMewtwoLady Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHERE WAS MAKOTO WHEN I WAS SICK
uhuhuhu so perfect
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Student Writer
I'm pretty sure a lot of people ask the same question and thanks :D
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TheMewtwoLady Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, I'm sure, you're welcome :D
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sonayu24 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Student
Sometimes I cry because Makoto Tachibana is perfect..... Loved the story!!!
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Student Writer
i feel your pain!

and thank you very much :D
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sonayu24 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Student
No problem! ^^
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WonSubok Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD *dies happy*
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Student Writer
Nooo don't die! Makoto just made you better
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WonSubok Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're right!La la la la  I'm ALIVE! X3 lol
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Student Writer
hurrah! :iconclappingplz::iconclappingplz::iconclappingplz:
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WonSubok Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
onion dance 
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Polygontus Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*Dies*
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ChudaChan Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yay! I waited for Makoto! :) I love this! Good job!
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you :D
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ChudaChan Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! ;)
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Cuddly-DorkPie Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconloveloveplz: so cute!!
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Writer
thank you :D I am glad you enjoyed :iconlaughingplz::iconlaughing2plz:
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Cuddly-DorkPie Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
hehe no problem XD
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EmilyBlackWing Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
Love it!   la in love  Sooooo kawaii!!!! Love Bounce 
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cute-eeveepokemon Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you :D, I am glad you enjoyed it :iconlaughingplz:
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EmilyBlackWing Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
You're welcome! Meow :3 
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